So this is the story... I tried to upload a deviation http://fav.me/d2q5ve3 (yeah that deviation) ina group called Illustrators online so I waited like 3 weeks for a response and they declined it, i said ok they must have their reasons so I kept on reading and I found this:
"I can see the effect you are going for, but unfortunately this has not been accepted.
Anatomically this is very good, but the shading with the paint is very inconsistent and messy (towards the right of the face and neck especially). I think overall it coudl do with a little more shading and depth.
Hope this helped. Please do not be discouraged